How you can make this more useful is by improving the messaging on your site. I looked at your hero section and I had no idea what your software does, who it does it for, why it does it and why should I care.
Since the hero section did not grab my attention, as a web visitor, I had 0 interest in investing more time/energy into reading the rest of the page to find the thread of relevancy. So I closed the tab.
Without the additional context you've put here on HN, I would have no idea what Pitch Forge is about.
Here's how I would rewrite it.
> Hero
Heading: Generate a pitch deck for your startup that gets you funding, fast
Subheading: Our AI is trained on the best decks to create a narrative that will have investors *begging* to meet you
> How it works?
1. It takes less than 5min
2. You get an E2E product from script, to powerpoint, etc...
3. Our narrative will 10x your positioning and speed up funding journey
> Why us?
1. First-time founders struggle to raise and it kills their businesses
2. The first point of contact is usually an intro or a deck. If deck isn't compelling enough, investors won't take meeting. No meeting = no check.
3. By improving your pitch, your will get more meetings. More meetings = more checks
etc....
This is already I meaningful step-up. Now I know exactly what your software does (helps create fundraising pitch decks), who it does this for (startup founders, probably first-timers), why it does it (no money kills businesses), why should I care (I should care if I want to raise money from investors and I want my business to not die)
I agree with this assessment. The copy is a little to generalized. Just by adding the word Startup to your headline, a reader would get a better understanding about what you do. Personally, I would drop the phrase Artificial Intelligence from the headline. I don't think it's necessary. Instead you should put the benefits you listed in its place. "Create the Perfect Startup Pitch in Minutes - Fast and Stress Free"
We are modifying the website after doing an analysis with semrush and hotjar.
So; all feedback is always appreciated.
We would also like to have more feedback on ideas and functionalities that could be useful for the saas.
Thanks for your time, by the way.
How you can make this more useful is by improving the messaging on your site. I looked at your hero section and I had no idea what your software does, who it does it for, why it does it and why should I care.
Since the hero section did not grab my attention, as a web visitor, I had 0 interest in investing more time/energy into reading the rest of the page to find the thread of relevancy. So I closed the tab.
Without the additional context you've put here on HN, I would have no idea what Pitch Forge is about.
Here's how I would rewrite it.
> Hero
Heading: Generate a pitch deck for your startup that gets you funding, fast
Subheading: Our AI is trained on the best decks to create a narrative that will have investors *begging* to meet you
> How it works?
1. It takes less than 5min
2. You get an E2E product from script, to powerpoint, etc...
3. Our narrative will 10x your positioning and speed up funding journey
> Why us?
1. First-time founders struggle to raise and it kills their businesses
2. The first point of contact is usually an intro or a deck. If deck isn't compelling enough, investors won't take meeting. No meeting = no check.
3. By improving your pitch, your will get more meetings. More meetings = more checks etc....
This is already I meaningful step-up. Now I know exactly what your software does (helps create fundraising pitch decks), who it does this for (startup founders, probably first-timers), why it does it (no money kills businesses), why should I care (I should care if I want to raise money from investors and I want my business to not die)